I drop the
Small stone,
Small, grey, tingling marble swirl,
In a small, grey, muddy puddle,
Cat joins me, lapping
To catch the currents,
And ride the ripples.
Given poetry writing is not my forte, the way you managed to use so few words to evoke such a vivid mental image is impressive. I really enjoyed this one. My hat’s off to you!
26/01/2012 at 09:33
That is sweet…lapping the ripples.
26/01/2012 at 16:54
Given poetry writing is not my forte, the way you managed to use so few words to evoke such a vivid mental image is impressive. I really enjoyed this one. My hat’s off to you!