Polly

Writings and Witterings

Spilt Milk

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Alleyway Refuge

He scrabbles in muck,
down on his luck,
a sorrowful sight,
with eyes swollen, tight
from crying
over milk
that was spilt
long ago.

He scrabbles in bins
for his things,
searches for food
in places you’d
rather avoid;
get’s annoyed
when offered help
he doesn’t want.

He scrabbles in brick dust,
crushed, flushed, stuffed
between lath
and plaster,
amongst jaws of
wood that splinters
against a darkening sky,
searching, always searching.

He scrabbles through days,
endless days,
tasteless days,
empty days,
and lays
his head down
at night
in a box,

with eyes swollen, tight
from crying
over milk
spilt.

Polly Robinson © 2012

 

He scrabbles …
Polly Robinson © 2012

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32 thoughts on “Spilt Milk

  1. Oooh, ‘eck, I keep forgetting about the time differences … it’s now 07:31 here :)

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  2. full of pathos Polly…the last stanza is especially powerful

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  3. Mm, I do like this. Poignant and plaintive.

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  4. Bleak and vivid – I really appreciated it – thank you :)

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  5. Poignant…the last stanza, powerful! :)

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  6. Constructed with a nice, tight rhythm. A compelling character portrait.

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  7. great sketch of the homeless guy..they have quite the plight…i have a big heart for the cast offs….no matter where i have lived i have found ways to spend time with them…they all have stories…and they are people just like us…only maybe one turn a bit different…

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  8. Very sad work. I like the lack of self pity in the character. There is almost a proud nobility to his futile search.

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  9. I like the use of scrambling in your verses, specially the last stanza ~

    Vivid description of the lost and lonely man ~

    A pleasure to meet you ~

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  10. Polly, I felt my fingers getting dirtier and dirtier with each stanza.
    What a description. Really observed or a combination?
    Quite something.

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  11. Awful, but everywhere. k.

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  12. K, they are … a sad reflection on society?

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  13. i wish society made it easier for them to find a way back… some of them don’t want to though.. life broke at a certain point for them and no way to get back to normal…i know about doctors that ended up as a homeless on the street

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  14. This went down well at last night’s do I thought. :) So brave being the opening act too!

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    • Thanks Holly – it can be a bit nerve-wracking being the first on … I had quite a few comments on this poem and on He Drinks Blood and like most of us use those as an indicator – I did think the poetry last night was well-received.

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  15. Regret can be a miserably haunting obsession, which you have described quite well in “Spilt Milk”…

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