Every January, Satya and Kaspa of Writing Our Way Home challenge us to write small stones thoughout the month. Here is my small stone for today.
Day Five
Diamonds sparkle like frost in winter sun
A cluster of memories shared.
Polly Robinson © 2013
From lloydsfamilyjewellery.co.uk
05/01/2013 at 12:51
Wonderful ripple!!!
05/01/2013 at 15:28
Thank you Jasmine
05/01/2013 at 15:49
Oh, now that’s ice that lasts. Beautiful!
05/01/2013 at 15:51
The best sort, Susan
06/01/2013 at 05:26
awww…I love these short pieces cause I do not expect the ending to grab me as much as it does!!
06/01/2013 at 05:28
Nice comment, thank you Maggie Mae
06/01/2013 at 15:44
Perfection!
06/01/2013 at 15:46
Aw, that’s nice of you, Ann
*blush*
10/01/2013 at 21:30
This is terrific. It leaves the reader constructing his own scenario. A connection is made that is diamond-like.
10/01/2013 at 21:34
What a great comment, thanks Andy ~ love that the connection is diamond-like
10/01/2013 at 21:37
That first line is beautiful. It has a syncopation, but still holds the rhythm fantastically. Really envious.
10/01/2013 at 21:42
heh-heh, thanks Andy … you’re having a ‘Polly evening’ like Alex did last night. She seemed to catch up with lots of my posts ~ thanks for all the comments ~ really valued.