Polly

Writings and Witterings

Fiery

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English: Sparkler Polski: Zimny ogień

Blaze
distal phalanges;
sparklers of pain,
in luminescent ligaments.
Carpals cussing, cursing
the dreadful digits,
gripping, griping,
grasping, gasping
rage.
Rage against
the pain.
Rage
through
agony.

Polly Robinson © 2013

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19 thoughts on “Fiery

  1. Made me suck in my breath with an ouch – pain. I mean the poem expresses pain, not that the poem is painful.

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  2. ha i like how this sounds when read out loud…nice

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  3. Very auditive poem!

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  4. Made me cringe – very clever Polly…

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  5. strong audible creation! : )

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  6. OK, audio done … will be interesting to see what you make of it …

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  7. Reblogged this on RicardosLive and commented:
    Wonderful selection of words. I like it.

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  8. Wonderful imagery~

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  9. “Rage against the pain” great imagery…I struggle with chronic pain & some days I rage against the pain! The audio version of this poem is amazing!!!

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